Leafless Pines

Alex's Prose

Mar 10

Nice work, enjoyed reading this!

thank you 🫡

I thought being in your MC's head was really engrossing. Great job! :D

Thank you! :) That means a lot.

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Living Through Movement

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It’s captivating to be inside someone’s mind like this. The sensory details really pulled me in.

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

I loved reading this. You write with such fantastic sensory details.

Thank you Jo! I’m glad you enjoyed it 😊.

Great work. I loved the part about comparing bubbles to little colonies/cities. The imagery is beautiful almost like a silent movie scene trying to make you feel things - nostalgia.

Thank you for sharing this!

thanks! that’s really cool to hear, because I imagine Theo to be kinda overly indulgent with nostalgia, so that makes sense :)

You’ve done an amazing job communicating the sentiment then! Cheers, well done 🤍

this is such cool writing! i could paint the whole picture, each scene, because of your vivid visual description. I had fun reading this🤍

Thank you Shaivya, I’m grateful for the very kind feedback :)

It was interesting how the mind in this piece moved between small and large things.

Bubbles, stars, childhood memories...

Like Theo was searching for meaning somewhere between them.

Thanks Dan! Yes, that’s perhaps one of the consequences of Theo’s somewhat ‘meaningless’ (at least he thinks it’s meaningless) existence.

I wouldn’t call it meaningless, but I’m not the one deciding that.

Oh neither would I, but maybe he doesn’t see it that way!

Nice work, Will

Thank you Samar :)

I loved reading this!!

Thanks Natalie!

Interesting. Here's my reply in 42 words. Enjoy!

https://ninjastroni.substack.com/p/lignification?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android&r=7uxj5l

Haha, that's really cool. Thanks for sharing man

Love the pacing. Felt very rhythmic and poetic. Enjoyed reading this!

Thanks Raechel! 😆

Very well written 👌🏻 I could tell you put a lot of effort in this 🫂

Thanks Minahil, that means a lot :)

Imagery is amazing immersive I’m lousy at that

Thanks Linda, I really appreciate it

Great work especially with all the sensory details !!

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it 😊

Nice work It Is really good

Thanks Arun

This was beautiful!! I loved the vivid imagery and the last paragraph really hit hard. Great writing!!!

Thank you so much, I’m happy with the last paragraph so it’s great to receive such kind feedback!

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